*viKKing* Posted Nov 11, 2006, 9:07 am	It's here: Darkwind Chronicles Please report typos and other wrong stuff. Thanks.
*sam* Posted Nov 11, 2006, 11:35 am	Excellent stuff! I like it more than the first one, probably because of the dust and flames ;-) Just a few typos/grammar: page 6: "James Nickel's buggy gets hit heavily too" page 9: "hit by another shot from Christine Gamble" "Maurice's car has turned over" page 10: "trying"
*sam* Posted Nov 11, 2006, 11:43 am	Also, I liked the way you varied the image sizes and positions, it keeps the pages interesting-looking. Something I liked from the first issue was the little bits of game history/geogrphy that you gave. It might be cool to put bits like that into other issues?
*viKKing* Posted Nov 11, 2006, 12:53 pm	Sam, This issue is a little bit shorter on the background side, you are right. It needs to be further developped, but I'm also looking to have more art to illustrate it, or it will rather be plain text - that as you pointed it right to me at a moment isn't very good for a cartoon... Also, I really wanted to finish it by this week-end, my father is paying us a visit next week, and I'll spend less to no time on Darkwind. I'll try to write down all the bouncing ideas I have before my brain gets overheated. I'm also hoping that after my soon to come "spamming" on mac and games site there will be more players involved. Next saturday is also my first daughter birthday, so it is a day off too... I'm expecting to release either a screenshots based trailer or a Darkwind's art chronicles issue by tomorrow. I will correct typos later in the evening, I'm out for the afternoon. I can't resist to add this forum post is quite long, and finally not so important; but as I spent time writing all that text, it would bad to trash it! Apologies to anyone reading this message from beginning to the end? See you on the finish line!