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Darkwind Chronicles Newspaper #3, issue is out
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Third issue is out.

If you liked the flames from issue #2, you will enjoy this one. It's a 3 pages issue. It was better to be off this race.

Direct link: Darkwind Chronicles Newspaper #3

Darkwind Chronicles general site: here
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*Posted Nov 27, 2006, 9:33 am Last edited Nov 27, 2006, 9:33 am by viKKing
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Nice issue :p

Not a nice race though, ouch! I haven't seen that much carnage in a flamethrower deathrace..

Just a couple of typos:

page 1
Somerset (not Sommerset)

page 2
"Joe.. and Ralph.. were *frantically* trying to" rather than "*hardly* trying to" (hardly trying to actually means they weren't trying to at all)
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Posted Nov 27, 2006, 10:07 am
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Quote:
page 1
Somerset (not Sommerset)


Shame on me for this one! I figured out to have cleared it. I'll have to update every newspaper issue, as I'ven't modified it for a while.

grrr.  :(
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Posted Nov 27, 2006, 11:45 am
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LOL I didn't know u were screen shotting that race :p

Jose's really famous now..if only he had lived to see it :(



great issue viK! tho I might just be a little biased ;)

and i had to put a link in my sig :cyclops:
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Posted Nov 27, 2006, 10:55 pm Last edited Nov 27, 2006, 11:03 pm by Toecutter
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Yessssss. The carnage!!!
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Posted Nov 27, 2006, 11:35 pm
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How did I know u'd be happy with that issue lol...I think we have another good (natured) Dark-Wind rivalry starting ;)
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Posted Nov 27, 2006, 11:39 pm
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im really starting to miss racing with you guys :(,,
but when i get onto the lobby i see people on but no1 seems to ever talk to me so i logoff :\ ill try tos ee if any1 is on right now and chat with you guys :D
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Posted Nov 28, 2006, 3:28 am
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Just missed u comp as I was writing on the forums when u popped in :stare:

better start racing again or you'll forget how to play ;)
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Posted Nov 28, 2006, 3:42 am
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oh yeah, heads up viK a few grammatical corrections headin yer way ^^

Page1:
Quote:
"Maybe they should haven't"
  should read "Maybe they shouldn't have"

Page2:
Quote:
"machineguns were were causing another kind of damages"
        damages just doesn't sound right and damage is a little boring..got a list of words that u could pop in the place of "damages"  pick the one that grabs ya  ;)

abuse, catastrophe, destruction, devastation, hardship, harm, mischief, suffering.

just a few ideas :)  personally I like the last 2..mischief tops suffering by a little bit tho lol

Keep it going, can't wait for the next issue already  :cyclops:
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Posted Nov 28, 2006, 4:48 am
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viKKing's face has faded red...

Hopefully this is written in english, my Slovenian is really worst.
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Posted Nov 28, 2006, 9:02 am
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lol don't worry about it, behind every great writer is an editor and a team of proof-readers :cyclops:
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Posted Nov 28, 2006, 1:22 pm
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and behind that TC is a nerd who will fix it or write a new one for u <----(ME)
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